My Moment In Time
This is my moment in time about seeing New Zealand from Young Nicks point of view.
We learnt this information on the heritage trail we went to.
We learnt this information on the heritage trail we went to.
Monday, 20 May 2019
1 comment:
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments:
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what we had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Kia ora Quinn,
ReplyDeleteI read the writing with interest as the tension built up and was holding my breath because of the tension you created. What an ending! Your use of descriptive language painted a picture in my mind.
I like the way you made the text prominent on your page . You used an appropriate image in the background that did not distract my attention away from the text. Well done!
I would like to see you include in your blog post reflections on your learning. What did you find challenging? Easy? Would you change anything?
What other stories do you know about Captain Cook in Turnaganui-a-Kiwa?
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie